Tuesday, October 27, 2009
Guest Blogger - Melissa D.
Hello all. Well this is my first blog and I was struggling for a while trying to exactly figure out what to write about and a came across the idea of talking about exactly what we have been doing in class lately, grading of true AP essays. We are given several examples of good and bad essays that are given on the AP test to get the AP credit. I am finally starting to see how much little things really affect the meaning and quality of a paper. I also never realized how easy it is to misread a simple question or even the passage given. In other papers I saw a lot of misspellings and crossed out parts, I then discovered that just because these papers had these basic mistakes, it did not affect the overall grade of the essay. Of course if the paper is not legible then that’s a whole other story. I believe that was my struggle when answering prompts in this class and also in previous classes was not answering the prompt. The prompts always seem to have a little bit of a hidden question that I never seemed to notice until being taught exactly what to look for and seeing the mistakes others made. After reading others responses, I became more aware of my mistakes and learned how to write an accurate and efficient AP response essay. I even was more aware of the things people are looking for when reading these essays and noticed more mistakes I commonly make. I also realized that a paper does not have to be long in order to make it good and just because you have text support doesn’t mean you are answering all the parts to the question. Today in class we got another prompt although this time we had forty minutes to read and respond to it. After all the practice we did in class, I went into the class room confident and ready. I truly believe I did a lot better than my first Beowulf essay, at least I hope so. This prompt also seemed a lot easier to answer because I knew what to do and how to do it. I have to admit, when we were told to read all those responses and grade them, I thought it was kind of silly, but I guess teachers actually give us homework for a reason.
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I know what you mean. Grading the AP essays helped to get a better understanding of what exactly the graders are looking for. It also helped grading other students essays because then we pick out the better ones from the worse and learned the mistakes and the good strategies.
ReplyDeleteI agree with you and Nijhum. Reading and scoring the essays really helped a lot with writing them. When we wrote our first essay I didn't answer the second part of the prompt but, after reading the AP essays it made me realize that you have to read the prompt a few times so you can figure out what exactly you are being asked to write about.
ReplyDelete-Karissa B.
grading the essays made me realize that you shouldnt fret during the whole time slot about how to speel certain words and how the grammar needs to be. although thats an important part of the essay it isnt the only thing that gives you your score.
ReplyDeleteI've learned from this unit that my essay doesn't have to be in five-paragraph form. After years of writing with that organization, it has gotten to be a habit and an easy go-to form. Many of the top scored essays had organization, but it wasn't always in five paragraphs.
ReplyDeleteYes, grading those essays have taught me a few things. One, is just the simple fact that the prompt must be completely answered which I did not do the first time around. Two, that organization is important but five paragraph essay form isn't required. Third, would be to realize how easily mistakes are noticed. I think I saw more flaws than the good points of the essays but part of that is just that I naturally go in and try to pick out the small nitpicky things and don't look at the whole picture. I liked doing this though because now I know what a good and bad essay look like and how they are compared and I have learned how to write a pretty good essay in a given amount of time.
ReplyDeleteI agree with you about learning more from being able to see what others wrote and the scores that they got. From doing this I also learned to carefully read the question. I also learned that the thesis of your paper should not just be a reworded version of the question you are supposed to answer.
ReplyDelete- jen anklan
Practice makes perfect and that is exactly what we are doing in class, practicing so by the end of the year we should be able to write a fairly good AP essay.
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